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Rinkelle on 2nd Mar 2017, 2:28 PM

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I really had fun drawing that last panel.
This page and the next one aren't necessarily among my favorites, I worked on them both over the span of like a month and a half where I picked up some new art tricks. I waffled a lot over whether to implement them in the pages or not, but in the end I decided against it.

The pacing is also not the best, things are a bit all over the place now that I'm looking back at them. I might rework this and page 76 in the future.

One positive thing, however, is the cameo in the third panel! I've been absolutely obsessed with Mystic Messenger since roughly the middle of October last year and I was waiting for a way to sneak in a cameo. You can see Yoosung and 707 walking in the background of panel 3.



ZeroGee on 2nd Mar 2017, 2:35 PM

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LOL last panel. <3

Rinkelle on 2nd Mar 2017, 3:04 PM

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Helen's nothing if not creative~

sketchdoll on 3rd Mar 2017, 7:55 AM

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Yay, a new page! I've been missing your pages so I'm glad to see a new one :D Nice job as always, that last panel looked like it would have been fun to draw!

Rinkelle on 3rd Mar 2017, 7:05 PM

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Thanks so much! I'm glad to be back to posting too even if things are still rocky on my end. I'm far from giving up on this comic!

NeilKapit on 3rd Mar 2017, 5:51 PM

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Welcome back! Good to see Lillith again, even if it's omake Lillith.

Rinkelle on 3rd Mar 2017, 7:04 PM

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Hahaha even generic store-brand Lilith has her charms~!

Helen

Dranorter on 4th Mar 2017, 3:01 AM

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Helen's pretty awesome! I hope she sorts out her anger stuff!

Rinkelle on 4th Mar 2017, 11:01 PM

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like her!!

I'm sure she will in time ^_^

BrokenBeat&Scarred on 4th Mar 2017, 6:27 AM

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I like that Helen thought to call her mum. Love the little details that you put in like that.

Rinkelle on 4th Mar 2017, 11:00 PM

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Haha I'm glad you like it! Helen and Lilith are both still teenagers so it makes sense to me to still have them be fairly reliant on their parents lol

Yay! new update!

Just a fan on 5th Mar 2017, 11:03 AM

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Glad to see you're still alive

Rinkelle on 5th Mar 2017, 7:27 PM

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Ahaha, yeah I'm not going anywhere for a long time, I've just got to be more disciplined and get my act back in gear lol

melaredblu on 5th Mar 2017, 11:30 PM

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I gotta say, her imagination's art style doesn't hold a candle to yours.

Rinkelle on 6th Mar 2017, 3:22 PM

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Haha well her interests are more into gardening than drawing lol

Prayformercy on 9th Mar 2017, 7:39 AM

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love that the rep guy just takes the phone and starts chit chatting with her mother :D Almost gives me the impression hes hitting on the mom as eager as he was to do that.

Also! hope things are going well for you Rinkelle :D Loving the comic and cant wait to see where it goes but as always make sure to take care of yourself as well!

Rinkelle on 11th Mar 2017, 10:47 PM

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He's just really extroverted and chatty lol, he'd talk your ear off if you let him.

Thanks!! I'm doing my best to try and find a balance of work, comics, and what little personal like I have lol thanks for sticking with me for so long~

Skygaurd101 on 11th Mar 2017, 7:09 PM

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Hey, I'm glad you are producing content again! Hope to see more of it soon. Kinda of a weird question but, my friend Bella is making a black and white comic. What are some tips that you have?

Rinkelle on 11th Mar 2017, 11:00 PM

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I don't think it's weird at all! I'm honored you came to me for advice (I just hope it's useful advice, this is all based on my personal preferences when reading black and white comics).

When I personally read black and white comics I tend to have trouble distinguishing things if there are too many details, all the lines can get so confusing. If they're going to do just strictly black-and-white, no grey or tones or anything, I'd suggest having varying line weight to help distinguish things (ie. heavier lines for things in the foreground, lighter ones for backgrounds).

Also, don't be afraid to use large washes of black, it can have a big impact especially in heavier/serious scenes but can also look nice stylistically (totally black hair, shirts, etc).

Negative space can have a big impact as well so don't be afraid to use negative space as well.

A great example I can think of for references is a comic called Persepolis. There's also a movie adaptation, both forms of media use primarily black-and-white artwork though I think the movie does use grey tones as well. It's really well written and the achromatic color scheme helps convey the story very well I think.

I hope this helps, but feel free to reach out again if you need something cleared up, I know I kind of glossed over a lot here but I usually work more with color so I don't have much first-hand advice to offer right now.

Skygaurd101 on 12th Mar 2017, 2:01 PM

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Thank you so much for the advice, I think she'll appreciate the advice from you. I will tell her during school. Again thank you so much.

Rinkelle on 12th Mar 2017, 9:11 PM

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You're welcome! Glad I could help~!

alston123 on 29th Mar 2017, 7:11 AM

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Haha. Her imagination though! XD

I love your backgrounds. :D:D

(Sorry I haven't commented in a while. College kept me busy, but I'm all caught up now.)

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2017, 12:25 AM

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Helen's taken a few creative liberties lol~

(Don't worry about it, I haven't updated in a while due to various things)
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