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17th Aug 2015, 8:00 AM

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Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 8:00 AM

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This was a fun page, I really enjoyed working on it from start to finish. Well maybe not to finish, I kept noticing that I'd forgotten this or that or such-and-such was off as I was rendering/exporting the image BUT IT GOT DONE!!

I really liked drawing the "poof" in the last panel, drawing swirly letters is so much fun. I kind of struggled with Lilith's panel. I wasn't sure what level of pain I should show since she got hurt "off screen". If you look closely you can see that a good part of her sleeve and part of her glove have been, well, evaporated, pretty much, and that her arm is kind of burnt.

I'm glad I can kind of talk about this part now. The reason her sleeve was seared into nonexistence and her arm is now burned is because of her bracelet. It's supposed to keep her magic powers from going out of control, and when she starts using too much, the light on it changes color and it shocks the wearer. When the light is blue, there's no risk of magic going nuts. When it turns yellow, it meant the wearer is getting close to the set limit of how much of their magical abilities they can use, and they get a warning shock. When it turns red, they've reached dangerous levels of magic usage, and they get a larger, slightly longer shock. Lilith's bracelet is red and she's been hurt, so she used more magic than what she was allowed to use that caused the bracelet to go a little nuts and shock her hard enough to burn her arm and sleeve.

....Looking at all that typed up it seems kinda harsh. I'm so mean to my characters, goodness.

Also, I know there's been a little confusion as to what Asher can and can't see so I'm going to clear it up: the only thing Asher can't see is Lilith herself. He can see Helen and all the magic flying back and forth and the clouds Lilith made (feel them too), but he cannot see or hear her.

That will be addressed more in chapter 2.

Oh, also also, since we're getting close to the end of chapter 1, I'm getting a wee bit impatient and will be uploading multiple pages over the course of the next two weeks on the website. I'm not sure how I'll handle that on Patreon yet but I'll work something out.

I'm going to post another page on Thursday of this week and one page Monday through Thursday next week and the last two pages on Friday. I'm pretty sure is how it'll go.



ZeroGee on 17th Aug 2015, 8:07 AM

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And now comes the fall. :D

Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 1:16 PM

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What goes up must come down. :)

Pandoras Box on 17th Aug 2015, 9:09 AM

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Okay, I'm probably in the minority here, but Asher is my favorite character. He's just too adorable! And poor Lilith in pain D:

I'm loving the reboot so far, keep up the fantastic work!

Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 1:15 PM

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Aaaah I'm so glad to hear that! He's one of my favorites too, actually, he's fun to write and draw. (and yeah, poor Lilith :(( )

I'm super glad you're enjoying the reboot :D

Centcomm on 17th Aug 2015, 10:04 AM

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poofy letters :D .. also neat info about the bracelet - great page all around!

Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 1:16 PM

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Thanks so much Centy!! I'm glad you like it <3

Jylani on 17th Aug 2015, 2:19 PM

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Nice, though I think I still like plant magic more than fluffy clouds... although that is a pretty nice cloud :D

Also ouch... that bracelet would fit in well with some of the equipment from one of my stories D:

Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 2:41 PM

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Well, everyone has their preferences so it's totally fine if you like the vines more than the clouds ^_^

alston123 on 17th Aug 2015, 6:22 PM

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Aw. Lilith is so sweet. She wouldn't hurt a fly. I hate that she got hurt. :(

Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 9:22 PM

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Oh man, I hate to tell you how the rest of the comic turns out then :/

Apvogt on 17th Aug 2015, 7:23 PM

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Who ever put that thing on her should know nothing good ever comes from magic inhibitors.

Rinkelle on 17th Aug 2015, 9:21 PM

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You'd think people would learn...

rufiangel on 18th Aug 2015, 7:59 PM

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Love, love, looove Lilith's magic <333

And omg that bracelet thing you described D: nuuuuu Lilith ;A; that's so sad!

Rinkelle on 18th Aug 2015, 11:03 PM

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Yeah, it's pretty sad but not the saddest thing d'ohohohoho.

I'm glad you like her magic, I really like it too!

melaredblu on 19th Aug 2015, 10:43 PM

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It kinda sucks to be Lilith. Does anything ever go right for the poor girl?

Rinkelle on 20th Aug 2015, 3:26 AM

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Mmm not yet :/ Some things will eventually.

Nef on 25th Aug 2015, 9:01 AM

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Back in the day, when dinosaurs roamed the Earth, I learned from my school teachers that I spend most of the day sitting on a cloud.

Are you telling me this is not the same for everyone? Not even comic creators and storytellers?

Rinkelle on 25th Aug 2015, 1:58 PM

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I think maybe it depends on how sturdy/what type of cloud the cloud is. :/
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