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3rd Aug 2015, 8:00 AM

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Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 8:00 AM

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I'm super duper proud of this page! All the effects and sound effects came out just how I wanted. I obviously really liked the heartbeat effect from the previous page so that showed up again in this one. I'm still trying to get the hang of magical/glowing lighting effects, so that doesn't look quite as good as it could.

I'm also trying to use gradient/effect backgrounds to try and emphasize things more.

Helen's getting a little more violent now, no one likes death threats :/ I'm also realizing I'm not quite sure how to draw Helen's hair when it's moving because of how evenly it's cut. Like smaller clumps might come to a tapered end but larger clumps I think would show the even-ness of the haircut better? I dunno, it's a learning experience.

Helen's dialogue in the last panel might not make sense just yet, but I promise an explanation is coming in chapter 2. Also the explanation is going to be far less convoluted than in the previous version of this comic. I kind of want it to spark interest in people without giving too much away, but I also don't want people to be thinking "what the heck is going on???" and wondering when I'm going to explain all this nonsense. So an explanation is on the way, I promise.

Goodness Asher's cheeks and nose look pink. I feel like they don't look that pink in other pages. Oh well.



101calicoes on 3rd Aug 2015, 8:15 AM

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Very nice and dramatic! I also like the new rating buttons :3

Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 1:13 PM

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Thank you!

Haha, I'm glad someone noticed them even though they're tiny and I never even mentioned it. ^_^

ZeroGee on 3rd Aug 2015, 8:40 AM

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Hellen's getting more violent? <3

Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 1:14 PM

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Mmmm yes >:3

Nama on 3rd Aug 2015, 8:42 AM

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How has she not been locked up?

Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 1:15 PM

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She's normally really good at keeping her temper under control. She hasn't had an outburst like this in three years, now she'll have to start a clean record all over again *tisk tisk*

alston123 on 3rd Aug 2015, 9:28 AM

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Oh boy. Aren't they in a pickle...
Yeah, no doubt. The effects are legit. Nice job!! :D

Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 1:14 PM

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Thank you so much!

And yes, yes they are.

melaredblu on 3rd Aug 2015, 3:10 PM

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Well that escalated quickly.

Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 10:31 PM

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Yup!

Centcomm on 3rd Aug 2015, 7:07 PM

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Ohhhh kay.. Decaf maybe?

(( great job on effects! ))

Rinkelle on 3rd Aug 2015, 10:34 PM

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Thanks! ^_^

Nef on 4th Aug 2015, 9:03 AM

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I'd say the hair came out as you wanted. You can tell it is uniform.
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Rinkelle on 4th Aug 2015, 11:07 AM

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Great, I'm glad you think so ^_^

PrussianMoose on 4th Aug 2015, 1:37 PM

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Tsk tsk tsk, all those years of anger management classes wasted. What a suspenseful page 0n0!!!

Rinkelle on 4th Aug 2015, 1:53 PM

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Looks like it's back to the therapist on Tuesdays. :/

LigerLychan on 4th Aug 2015, 9:41 PM

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well, looks like somebody has some major anger issues. she needs to chill...but she's so cute when she's angry (and deadly). actually everybody is cute, but still!

Rinkelle on 4th Aug 2015, 10:43 PM

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Yeah, Helen clearly has some issues... >.>

rufiangel on 4th Aug 2015, 9:42 PM

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doki doki doki~~

I like the heartbeat effect! :D

But yeah... uhm... did she not notice that one of the boys was, actually, trying to leave? Yeesh, Helen. lol

Rinkelle on 4th Aug 2015, 10:44 PM

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She's just ignoring that, she wants to see blood.

I'm glad you like it ^_^

Damatris on 8th Aug 2015, 3:11 AM

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Well... She sure is aggressive one. O___O
But those heartbeats are working really well here.

Rinkelle on 8th Aug 2015, 1:12 PM

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Yes, yes she is. I'm glad you like them ^_^
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