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Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 8:00 AM

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I tried using more speed lines on this page, I think they worked out well.

I don't really have much to talk about for this page. I did try something new with the heartbeat thing in the last panel to try and show that the situation is making Lilith nervous, so I hope that came across prior to anyone reading this blurb.

Thanks for reading~ See you next week! <3



Centcomm on 27th Jul 2015, 8:17 AM

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I like the heart beat :D .. actually i like the whole darn page! :D

Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 1:39 PM

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Thanks Centy! ^_^

Mayyday on 27th Jul 2015, 10:18 AM

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I've had moments like that last panel. The heart rate monitor is a nice touch. ;)

Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 1:40 PM

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Thanks, I'm glad you like it ^_^

Nef on 27th Jul 2015, 10:45 AM

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I like the flowery effects inside the font, giving the idea of who casted the green blast (not that we needed much guidance on that). I've always find very interesting how different authors use symbols to express things(the heart beat, in this case) and it's funny that we actually understand them. It's almost like an alternate language by now.
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Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 1:42 PM

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I'm glad you like it! ^_^ I actually give each character a specific color I use for sketching them in illustrations and stuff so I know who is who before I start refining the sketches, and it kind of creeped over into comic pages by way of sound effects and the color of their thought-dialogue and thought bubble outlines.

Allzephyr on 27th Jul 2015, 10:58 AM

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Aha, see? NOW she's just attacking people. What a tool.

Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 1:39 PM

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Haha what a loser

ZeroGee on 27th Jul 2015, 12:06 PM

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He cant see it but he's gonna feel it. :)

Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 1:37 PM

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Someone's going to be sore tomorrow.

alston123 on 27th Jul 2015, 2:42 PM

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Yeah. I like the heartbeat thing. :3
Oh boy. Things just got real. -_-

Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 3:18 PM

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So real like dang this some real stuff right here

melaredblu on 27th Jul 2015, 10:30 PM

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For a split second, I thought the patterns in that sound effect in the second-to-last panel were pot leaves. I'm so mature.

Rinkelle on 27th Jul 2015, 10:53 PM

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420 blaze it

JustNoPoint on 29th Jul 2015, 6:30 PM

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You generally always have to make time for the crazy room mates! The sane ones are the ones.... haha there are no sane room mates!

I forgot not everyone can see her. So the page was a bit confusing on the 1st read. Kinda wished it showed a broader image of the area from purple guy's POV

Rinkelle on 29th Jul 2015, 8:05 PM

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You make a fair point there, but I've never had a real roommate so I'll take your word on that :)

I get where you're coming from. I'll try and remember to draw up how things look from Asher's perspective because he's in a weird position right now.
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