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6th Jul 2015, 8:00 AM

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Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 8:00 AM

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The backgrounds are kind of bland on these recent pages, I need to try to use more (and more interesting) angles in my panels. Fortunately the pages I'm currently drawing at the time this gets posted are full of action so I've got the opportunity to use more interesting angles (and poses).

I'm not really sure if what's really going on between the four characters is clear at this point in the story, but it'll become clear once chapter 2 gets rolling. Chapter 1 is mostly set up for the events that set the whole story in motion.

But on the plus side things are far less convoluted than the last time I tried writing this part of the comic.

This page was pretty easy to draw, no unforeseen or unexpected problems popped up while working on it. I can't help feeling like it's kind of bland in regards to the backgrounds though, but as I said before, I'll be working on using more interesting and varied angles in future pages.



101calicoes on 6th Jul 2015, 8:36 AM

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I don't think it's bland! And if they are, it's a good thing, since the characters are the main part of those panels. And the snow is so sparkly :3
And don't worry, the story line is nice and clear.
The last panel is really good, too! I love her expression (^u^)

Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 2:11 PM

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Aaah thank you so much <3 I'm glad you like it!

alston123 on 6th Jul 2015, 9:09 AM

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Neither do I. I especially love the background in the second to last panel. :3
She may seem to be a jerk, but she's not all that intimidating. I think they could take her. I at least think they should try, considering that she is such a jerk. ^^

Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 2:08 PM

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I'm glad you like them ^_^

They could totally take her, she's outnumbered three to one.

Centcomm on 6th Jul 2015, 10:28 AM

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Lovely page as always Rin! you sure have a way with the lines and color .. and it just keeps getting better! ( to the only anime comic artist I really enjoy the work of!! that would be you Rinkel!)

Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 2:07 PM

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Thanks Centy~ <3

Nef on 6th Jul 2015, 3:10 PM

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Well, backgrounds have to be what they have to be. They depend on the story. Sometimes, the story calls for a sweeping panoramic view, sometimes for mid shots or sometimes close-ups. In comics, sometimes the amount of dialogue also plays a part, because you NEED to make room for all those word balloons.

I really like your art, and think your backgrounds are appropriate to the story at this time and that if and when they are needed, awesomeness and epicness will be summoned.

Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 3:20 PM

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Aw, thanks so much! That's so sweet of you ^_^

melaredblu on 6th Jul 2015, 4:30 PM

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Lilith I understand, but how are ALL of them blushing red?

Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 8:54 PM

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Their cheeks and noses are all rosy red because it's cold.

melaredblu on 6th Jul 2015, 10:22 PM

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Yeah, but it seems odd with those unusual skin colors. I dunno, it just seems to me like their blushes would be more tinted with their skin tone. Does that make sense?

Rinkelle on 9th Jul 2015, 10:09 PM

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It does make sense but I'm still learning how to do certain things in my comic and working with abnormal skin tones is one of them.

Also sorry for the delayed reply, I missed the notification for this somehow >.< forgive me

melaredblu on 10th Jul 2015, 11:57 PM

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Ah, no big deal. Happens to me too.
Working with abnormal skin tones is a challenge all its own, isn't it? Lucky for me I'm lazy and make most of my comic greyscale, haha.

ZeroGee on 6th Jul 2015, 4:36 PM

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So much for the rules. And I like this page too.

Rinkelle on 6th Jul 2015, 8:55 PM

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Rules schmules. Thanks ^_^

JustNoPoint on 9th Jul 2015, 6:56 AM

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A very chipper gal isn't she?

Rinkelle on 9th Jul 2015, 1:24 PM

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Very much so.

vousrein on 9th Jul 2015, 8:09 AM

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I think your backgrounds have been fine! The characters are the most important thing here so it balances out :) I like how you use a lot of different effects for speech bubbles and actions too, it's enough that it's interesting without being confusing

Rinkelle on 9th Jul 2015, 1:25 PM

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Aah thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
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