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Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 7:00 AM

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This page looks simple but it was just a pain to draw for some weird reason.

I'm not sure why but I just struggled a lot with it. Oh well, it's done now.

I really enjoy drawing Helen, she's so easy to draw most of the time. I also like her redesign a lot, it's less of a mess than her design was in the first version because honestly she was just going to be a one-off character that showed up just for that scene and was never seen again but I ended up liking her too much and started planning to have her show up again later in the comic, so for this version I just fleshed her character out more and gave her a better design.

Ok, last time I'll talk about her redesign, I promise.

This page doesn't really have much happening action wise, but the dialogue is what's important. Kind of. It's not really noticeable just how strongly Helen feels about the "scum" thing right now I think, but it'll be explained later on.

I think that's all I have to say about this page, see you next week!

Oh, also, I've gone back and edited pages 1 and 2 of chapter 1 because I'm a complete idiot and forgot to draw something that has some significance later in the chapter when I drew those pages.



Nama on 29th Jun 2015, 7:02 AM

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Racist.

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 10:48 AM

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Yes, unfortnuately :(

ZeroGee on 29th Jun 2015, 7:47 AM

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That's not nice. :(

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 10:49 AM

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Absolutely not nice at all >:( shame on you, Helen.

xianyu118 on 29th Jun 2015, 8:08 AM

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Wow, rude.

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 10:49 AM

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Very rude >:0

Allzephyr on 29th Jun 2015, 9:05 AM

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I'd say that was uncalled for, but then again she did fall 20 feet onto her head. Still.

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 10:50 AM

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Maybe Helen is overreacting a bit, but it's no reason to get nasty.

HeSerpenty on 29th Jun 2015, 9:27 AM

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Lolol Ok...this might be a really dumb question...and I'll let you poke my eye if it is XDD

But.. is Lilith invisible in Panel 3? I only ask cuz in the other panels she seems close to Helen, but panel 3 she's nowhere.. but I see another lil breath cloud? Maybe I'm crazy-- I thought perhaps panel 3 could be the perpective of someone else who maybe can't see Lilith (like Asher or somethin)

Hahaa anyways.. great page! I greatly enjoy your attention to detail!

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 10:52 AM

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Oh, no she's just supposed to be off screen in that panel. Like she's picking herself up off the ground but her balance was off and she stumbled off screen a bit.

I wanted Helen to be the main focus of that panel anyway.

I'm glad you like it ^_^

alston123 on 29th Jun 2015, 10:04 AM

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Wow. Jerk, much? :( She's not a dog. Some people can be so rude.

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 10:54 AM

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Geez, Helen, not cool. It obviously was an accident so there's no real reason for her to get so nasty.

Nef on 29th Jun 2015, 11:16 AM

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Darned olive supremacists!

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 11:22 AM

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They think they're sooooooo much better than the rest of us.

101calicoes on 29th Jun 2015, 12:22 PM

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Somebody's being feisty.
I really like the first panel for some reason. Maybe because I can't draw hands to save my life. XD

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 1:23 PM

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To be honest I still struggle with hands a lot X'D But I'm glad you like it! ^_^

rufiangel on 29th Jun 2015, 7:11 PM

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Oof, harsh, Helen D:

Love the panel with Lilith's hand for some reason... I do like hands XD;; <3

Ah... everything is so sparkly in the page (Helen's lids are gorgeous!) but there is much sad going on behind D:

Rinkelle on 29th Jun 2015, 9:50 PM

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Well, you know what they say: Underneath beauty lies... idk sadness or something.

I'm glad you like the page though ^_^

HapyCow on 30th Jun 2015, 3:12 AM

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Loving Helen's outfit! I looked at pages 1 and 2 again, and I'm gonna guess you added her bracelet..which may be a house arrest sort of bracelet?

Rinkelle on 30th Jun 2015, 10:53 AM

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It is the bracelet, but what it's for will be revealed later ;)

melaredblu on 30th Jun 2015, 9:57 PM

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I guess Lilith is probably too polite to say "up yours, too", huh?

Rinkelle on 30th Jun 2015, 10:29 PM

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Haha, probably :P

Prayformercy on 3rd Jul 2015, 10:46 PM

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you know what? im glad she didnt yell "Look out"

Rinkelle on 3rd Jul 2015, 11:43 PM

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Yeah I'm so glad everyone is having these reactions ohmygosh this is exactly what I wanted

Damatris on 8th Aug 2015, 2:08 AM

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That's reaally harsh and rude and definitely not okay even if she did land on you. D:

Rinkelle on 8th Aug 2015, 12:14 PM

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Yup yup, someone needs to re-learn how to interact with people.
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