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22nd Jun 2015, 7:00 AM

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Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 7:00 AM

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This was another page I really liked drawing. I was super excited to draw Helen (the green-skinned girl) with her updated design, I love it so much it's so easy.

First things first: In the first panel Lilith's saying "oh crap" because she realized she's be landing on Helen. There will be more 'alien languages' like that in the comic in the future and they'll all have translations so don't worry about wondering what everyone will be saying.

Lots of sound effects on this page. Normally I hand-write the sound effects because there hasn't been anything that would need to look a certain way until now (the "crash" in panel 2), so I used a font for that.

Helen is probably overreacting just a bit in regards to her recently repotted plant being smashed, but she really loves plants/nature so in her mind she's reacting mildly. Also there's some animosity between her and Lilith (as for why, that is a liiiiiiiittle bit of a spoiler (just a bit) that'll be revealed on the next few pages), but that's helping to fuel Helen's anger.

Honestly I don't really have much to say about this page. It was fairly easy to work on, no real set backs with it, it was good. I really like it when new characters are introduced (well, new to some readers, not to me and people that read the old version) so this page is a little bit special to me for that reason.

Also at the time this page gets posted I'm settling in from moving (again) but I have a buffer of pages so hopefully the comic's update schedule won't suffer too much.



ZeroGee on 22nd Jun 2015, 7:44 AM

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"What is with people in this city!?" :D

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:35 AM

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Helen is a #CountryGal4Life

Allzephyr on 22nd Jun 2015, 7:46 AM

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I like the new design for Helen here, and her intro is definitely more chill than in the last version. That being said, that poor plant must be traumatized now; I wouldn't be surprised if its growth gets stunted.

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:36 AM

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Haha yeah that was something I wanted to do with this version, have her intro be less intense.

Avenge the plant! Start a repotting kickstarter! It deserved much better than this!

Nef on 22nd Jun 2015, 9:09 AM

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I'm sure people just keep falling on her left and right (and above)

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Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:37 AM

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Crazy city people, lemme tell ya. Always jumping off things and stuff.

Centcomm on 22nd Jun 2015, 9:44 AM

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I really like how the comic now goes to "lastest" page rather than some cover or title page ill not count the times ive come to a comic and found "cover" and keep clicking to find the last page.. well done on the art you just keep getting better and better :D

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:39 AM

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Uh, thanks I guess?

I'm glad you like the art though, it'll get even better in the future ^_^

Centcomm on 23rd Jun 2015, 8:34 PM

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Its most assuredly a Compliment .. sorry if it didnt seem that way!

alston123 on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:01 AM

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Ok. Dude, chill. It obviously was an accident. Sheesh. -_-

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:38 AM

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For reals tho. Like, calm down, it's not that serious.

Jarvi on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:34 AM

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Ohhhh we know that one :D
I'm excited to see my prince :D I hope he didn't change much and is still so hot :D

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 5:04 PM

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His design didn't really change much at all so don't worry :)

101calicoes on 22nd Jun 2015, 11:27 AM

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I'm liking the new language.

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 5:06 PM

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I'm glad to hear it ^_^

Jylani on 22nd Jun 2015, 2:47 PM

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Haha, that's how I'd react if someone hurt my plants :D Just had to comment since I'm a horticulture student and this page really amused me :)

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 5:07 PM

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Oh that's cool ^_^ I think anyone would react similarly if something they loved was ruined :9

melaredblu on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:23 PM

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I like her language. It kind of looks like crop circles!

Rinkelle on 22nd Jun 2015, 10:44 PM

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I'm glad to hear it! ^_^

JustNoPoint on 24th Jun 2015, 10:33 AM

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Language!

Rinkelle on 24th Jun 2015, 11:16 AM

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Tch, kids these days.

Prayformercy on 27th Jun 2015, 7:29 AM

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instead of "OH CRAP" she shoulda went with, "LOOK OUT"

Rinkelle on 27th Jun 2015, 12:32 PM

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Maybe next time she'll say something along those lines :P

Damatris on 8th Aug 2015, 2:07 AM

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That landing wasn't as cool tho xD

Rinkelle on 8th Aug 2015, 12:15 PM

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She just can't be cool all the time, no matter how hard she tries :/
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