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Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 7:00 AM

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This page! I've been wanting to draw this page for so long! It's the first time I've really drawn something dynamic like this so I was super excited to draw it.

That said, I did hit a few snags along the way. First and foremost: Lilith's pose in the bottom panel. It was something I'd never drawn before so of course it was a challenge. I sketched and re-sketched different parts countless times to make sure the anatomy worked correctly and that her legs weren't detaching from her body and flying off into space. Looking at it now it's not entirely perfect but I'm still very proud of how it turned out. I kind of wish I'd drawn more of her hair breaking the panel border, though, it looks cool (to me, at least).

The perspective of that bottom panel gave me a bit of trouble too. It was just strange to work with despite it being only a large wall and one corner of a building because the wall is on a downhill slope and the building isn't (well technically it is but it's build so it's not slanting) so it looks kind of odd. I'll probably sketch up something showing how it looks head-on and post it later so it looks less weird than it does here.

I did alter the dialogue a bit from the original script, what Lilith's thinking in panels 3 and 4 weren't in the script. I added them, though, because it just seemed to make sense given what happens in the rest of the chapter that leads right into chapter 2.

I really love how Lilith's colors are all mostly pastels and the boys have more intense, earthy kind of colors. It's a nice contrast I noticed (I didn't plan it, I just tend to put Lilith in pastel colored clothing).

At the time I'm posting this I've finished up the script for chapter 1 (finally) and will probably finish thumbnails for the chapter soon, then get started on chapter 2. I've been finishing pages fairly quickly so hopefully I'll be able to finish chapter 1 soon and start working on things for chapter 2 art-wise.

Thanks for reading, see you next week! <3



Nama on 15th Jun 2015, 7:04 AM

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Run run, as fast as you can.

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 12:04 PM

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You can't catch me, I got a head start.

Allzephyr on 15th Jun 2015, 7:25 AM

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The last panel came out great, I love it.

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 12:04 PM

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Thanks! I'm so glad to hear that! :D

AJHunter on 15th Jun 2015, 7:59 AM

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:o did you do a rewrite? It looks good :D

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 12:05 PM

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I did. I rebooted the whole comic back in like... January and started releasing pages in March. Thanks :)

ZeroGee on 15th Jun 2015, 8:50 AM

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Hair! Ah that hair! :3

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 12:05 PM

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Voted Best Hair in a Webcomic 2K15

101calicoes on 15th Jun 2015, 8:55 AM

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That last panel! So great! *glomp*

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 12:05 PM

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I'm glad you like it! ^u^ I'm super happy with how it turned out.

alston123 on 15th Jun 2015, 10:51 AM

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Haha. Dynamic is the word. It's a very cool panel. ^^

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 12:06 PM

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Thanks so much!! ^_^

Nama on 15th Jun 2015, 1:05 PM

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Rinkelle, we need to talk about this repetitive habit of yours.

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 1:45 PM

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Ugh fine god what are you my mom eeeeesh

melaredblu on 15th Jun 2015, 7:23 PM

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Why can she see you? Gosh, it's hard to say. You're usually so inconspicuous and ordinary.

Rinkelle on 15th Jun 2015, 9:32 PM

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Maybe if you tried standing out a bit more? Or doing something more conspicuous.

Nef on 16th Jun 2015, 9:10 AM

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I saw 6 fingers on the left hand in panel 3. Then I looked again and saw 5. But then I saw 6 again and realized that my glasses are dirty. Her hand has a perfect 5.

Rinkelle on 16th Jun 2015, 9:15 AM

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Yep. No extra fingers here.

JustNoPoint on 17th Jun 2015, 3:21 AM

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They can't see me if I don't walk on my feet!

Rinkelle on 17th Jun 2015, 11:21 AM

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It's a genius plan, they'll never find me now!

BellaRoisinDubh on 18th Jun 2015, 4:35 PM

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I get the struggle with awkward poses. Usually I make someone pose and take a picture of them haha! But I really like this page, especially her hair. And I did notice the contrasting colors between the characters! Very nice page. I can't wait until next week! ^_^

Rinkelle on 18th Jun 2015, 4:50 PM

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Yeah, I end up taking my own reference photos sometimes too if I can't find a decent one online. Unfortunately this time that wasn't feasible for me :P

I'm looking forward to next week too, things really start moving forward starting with the next page ^_^

hipopotamo on 28th Jul 2015, 6:05 PM

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I really love the final pose of Lilith, all your hard work really shows.

Hard to miss the girl with the long flowing hair who is also running...

Rinkelle on 28th Jul 2015, 9:59 PM

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Haha thanks ^_^ Yeah, she makes quite a spectacle in certain crowds.

hipopotamo on 28th Jul 2015, 7:11 PM

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What a wonderful pose for Lilith on the last panel. All that work really paid up!

Ha, everybody can see the running girl with the long floating blue hair!

Rinkelle on 28th Jul 2015, 10:00 PM

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Thanks, I'm glad you like it ^_^

Damatris on 8th Aug 2015, 2:06 AM

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Instinct. But that's a really cool way to cross a wall. :3

Rinkelle on 8th Aug 2015, 12:16 PM

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The Cool Way is the only way in this town.
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