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8th Jun 2015, 8:00 AM

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Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 8:00 AM

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I remember when I was working on this page I had a lot of fun working on the background character in the third panel. I don't know why but I really loved experimenting with her outfit and hair/skin colors and the few bleached streaks in her hair. I want to draw/color more hair like that. Also I've been experimenting with giving female characters make up (which is a lot harder, I'm learning, when they have pink or blue skin) and though I don't think it's super noticeable she does have make up on. Eyeshadow (possibly the most noticeable), eyeliner (not very noticeable I think), and lipstick/lipgloss/colored chapstick or whatever else adds color to lips.

I'm also trying to use more sound effects and stuff, because for the longest time that was something I never did and while in my head everything on a page moved like it was animated with sound effects and everything, it never really got translated onto the page because of lack of sound effects. So I'm forcing myself to add them where/when needed (also expressive lines and such like in the second panel when Canan registers that Lilith's run off).

Overall the page was easy to draw. Nothing gave me much trouble and I didn't run into any major problems while working on it. I can't help feeling that my backgrounds are a little lackluster, though. I don't know why. Maybe the buildings just feel oddly bland to me. Like they lack character or something. I'm sure I'll figure it out sooner or later, though, and can make them even better.

I really like coloring Canan's red-tipped fingers and knuckles in addition to everyone's rosy cheeks and noses. I think it really helps it feel like winter.



alston123 on 8th Jun 2015, 9:45 AM

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Yeah, I have been recently trying to add more sound effects to my comics. ^^
This is a great page. I love the action. Aw. She is so freaked out. :(

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 2:52 PM

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Haha thanks :)

Yeah, I have to consciously remind myself to add them sometimes otherwise I'll just forget.

rufiangel on 8th Jun 2015, 10:51 AM

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The rosiness is cute <3 X3

But yeah, hmmm... Lilith is going to have to pull some acrobatic stuff like leap up to the roof or something (very Son Gohan) if she wants to get away quick XDDD

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 2:52 PM

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Maybe she will? Who knows????

I do. I know. I'm not telling.

Nef on 8th Jun 2015, 1:34 PM

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I find that background characters are a great way to live-test new art. Some of the techniques I use now were first introduced in background characters.

The difference between your art and mine is that mine is about 7.34% as good as yours. I just love the way you draw.

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 3:04 PM

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Thanks! I've just been doing it nonstop for years so I could constantly improve, that's the main reason why I'm where I'm at now.

Apvogt on 8th Jun 2015, 2:25 PM

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What would Lilith look like with streaks of bleached hair?

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 3:23 PM

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Give me like thirty minutes and we'll see :)

ZeroGee on 8th Jun 2015, 4:20 PM

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So let's not ask this other girl for directions. :D

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 5:15 PM

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"I TOLD you to use the GPS on your phone, Canan!"

"What is it with men and asking for directions?"

Allzephyr on 8th Jun 2015, 4:28 PM

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Wait, this wasn't part of my plan. Then again, most of my plans end in disaster anyway. Oh well, adventure!

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 5:22 PM

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Adventureeeeeeee!!!

arctic-ferret on 8th Jun 2015, 8:24 PM

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Really enjoying your comic. Your Graphic Style looks like high-tech Anime and that's an awesome style. :D Cant wait to see where this series goes.

Rinkelle on 8th Jun 2015, 10:22 PM

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Thanks, I'm glad you like it ^_^

melaredblu on 9th Jun 2015, 1:43 AM

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Being chased through the snow. I dunno about you, but given the trouble her hair gives her already, I imagine her 'do is going to prove regrettable in the long run.

Rinkelle on 9th Jun 2015, 2:44 AM

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It causes a lot of problems for her in general. That's why she uses ****magic**** on it to make it less of a bother.

JustNoPoint on 9th Jun 2015, 9:47 AM

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You stop before we have to catch you and MAKE YOU STOP!!! Don't be afraid!

Rinkelle on 9th Jun 2015, 3:02 PM

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Yeah!!!

Mayyday on 11th Jun 2015, 12:08 AM

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I highly approve of girls with bleached bangs.

In other news, water is wet.

Rinkelle on 11th Jun 2015, 12:58 AM

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:)
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