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Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 7:00 AM

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The magnificent return of Lilith's second set of adoptive parents! Some of you might remember these two from the previous version of the comics. I did a little bit of a design change with these two, but nothing super drastic. I changed Etzy's skin color so it's less saturated yellow and a more normal-pinkish color and gave her hair a darker tint towards the tips. For Lex... I think I just tried to make him look older, I didn't really change much else.

Also I've changed the font I use to one that's easier to read (it's still based off my handwriting though). I've also updated all the prior pages with the new font so the font doesn't just change randomly on page 4. I spent a lot of time on it trying to make it look decent and readable and I'm pretty darn happy with the outcome so I hope you all like it too.

I'm also deeply considering revamping the cast page. I've developed a fondness for headshot silhouettes that turn into colored headshots when the character appears so I might try to do something like that and link to a small blurb about the character. For each new story arc I'd add a new clump of silhouette heads and as the characters show up I'd reveal the headshot and small blurb. What do you think?

Mmm, I think that's about it for this page. I promise next week I'll talk about the pictures in the frames all over their house since they show up a lot more on the next page.

Thanks for reading, see you next week! ❤



ProfEtheric on 6th Apr 2015, 7:14 AM

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Or, here's a suggestion, Lilith. Braids.

Very sweet page. :)

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 10:00 AM

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Darn stubborn teenagers, making everything complicated!

Nama on 6th Apr 2015, 7:20 AM

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Eye circles.

EYE CIRCLES.

HELLO, MY FRIEND.

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 10:00 AM

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He always looks like that when he first wakes up. It's canon. Lex is not a morning person.

D on 8th Apr 2015, 10:00 AM

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He looks just like me. Aside from eye/hair color, that is. Even hair length, death-like voice and pajamas are similar.

Rinkelle on 8th Apr 2015, 11:20 AM

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Oh really? How cool! ^_^

Binyamin on 6th Apr 2015, 7:25 AM

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... I was just going to ask why she doesn't cut it. Now I know. Her parents want her to.

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 10:02 AM

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Yes there's that. She also has some (silly) personal reasons for keeping it so long.

But she's the one that has to suffer through washing and brushing and taking care of it, so she has no one to blame but herself!

ZeroGee on 6th Apr 2015, 8:23 AM

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Somebody don't want haircut. :D

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 10:02 AM

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Haircuts are for DORKS!

Nah, she's just stubborn about keeping her Rapunzel hair :9

Epiale on 6th Apr 2015, 9:15 AM

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The hair is awesome, I wouldn't want to cut it either, haha.

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 10:03 AM

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It is so very awesome.

She does tie it up in different ways though so it's not constantly dragging on the floor and getting caught in doors. Depends what she's doing.

rokulily on 6th Apr 2015, 10:51 AM

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she's so small now! keep your hair small lilith!

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 11:04 AM

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So small and tiny and cute.

alston123 on 6th Apr 2015, 11:27 AM

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Hehe. You tell her, Lilith! ;D

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 11:32 AM

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"Neverrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!"

Apvogt on 6th Apr 2015, 4:13 PM

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Click link and look to the bottom left panel for an adorably excecuted "neverrrrr".
http://blindsprings.com/comic/099

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 4:21 PM

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Oh gosh yeah! Tammy's so cute ^_^

NamePendingCreations on 6th Apr 2015, 12:16 PM

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I second the notion to cut her hair!

Haha, I really do wonder what Lilith would look like with shorter hair...

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 12:48 PM

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She'd look about the same as she does now just without the ponytails.

Drobvirks on 6th Apr 2015, 1:48 PM

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God your art has improved so much. These pages are such a treat to look at! *__*
The story flow is so good too, I'm completely sucked in.

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 2:25 PM

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Aaaaah thank you so much Drob! I'm so glad you feel like that, I'm doing my best to bring both the story and art to a new level <3

TheD-Wrek on 6th Apr 2015, 3:39 PM

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Cut that gorgeous hair!? NEVARRRR~ :O

XD

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 3:55 PM

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Looks like fans are divided between "cut it" and "don't cut it" oh nooooo

While I do with I had longer hair I don't think I'd want it this long :9

Allzephyr on 6th Apr 2015, 3:47 PM

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I'm not really in a position to judge Lilith. Every kid in my family has gone through the long hair stage. However, only one has achieved the foot-wide white man's afro. We're kind of jealous.

The character profile idea sounds great, it sure solves the problem of critical characters being known about way ahead of time.

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 3:57 PM

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Oh man I'm jealous too, that sounds like quite the accomplishment.

Yeah, that's another reason to make the cast page like that. Another is the headshots will do a better job of displaying the character than what I've currently got on that page. I'll probably start making the busts this week after I get some more work done on pages.

melaredblu on 6th Apr 2015, 5:15 PM

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I like Peeking Around the Door Guy already.

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 5:37 PM

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Yeah, he's great, I can't wait to show him more often.

Jarvi on 6th Apr 2015, 10:08 PM

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Such unreasonable suggestions ..!

Rinkelle on 6th Apr 2015, 10:49 PM

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How dare such suggestions be made in this house?! I won't stand for it!

Onee-Chan on 7th Apr 2015, 12:40 AM

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You tell him, Lilith! Getting all your hair chopped off is traumatic as hell!

Rinkelle on 7th Apr 2015, 10:13 AM

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Heck yeah it is, especially when it's really long or you've been trying to grow it out.

Onee-Chan on 13th Apr 2015, 8:47 PM

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My hair is only now almost back to the length it was before that crazy woman chopped it off in high school. So that "Never in my life" made me laugh. :)

Rinkelle on 13th Apr 2015, 8:57 PM

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Oh my gosh really?? That's such a long time ago :o

Spelledeg on 8th Apr 2015, 8:08 AM

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Aww, there's Lex and his doilies! I can understand Lillith's sentiment though since it takes a while to grow hair out. This page looks really good, Rink! :D

Rinkelle on 8th Apr 2015, 11:10 AM

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Yes, the doilie collection is here to stay! I know, I've been trying to grow mine out for two years now and it's pretty long but the ends are breaking and splitting and agh I kind of want to cut it off so it grows better but it took so long to get it this length >.<

Thanks Spelle <3

JustNoPoint on 10th Apr 2015, 7:45 AM

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MY HAIR HAS FEELINGS TOO YOU KNOW!

Rinkelle on 10th Apr 2015, 10:31 AM

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Every single hair has feelings, why can't you understand that?

Prayformercy on 10th Apr 2015, 11:51 AM

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I see nothing wrong with cutting it all off. So stubborn :D Loving the art in these pages though, keep up the great work!

Rinkelle on 10th Apr 2015, 12:30 PM

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Stubborn teenagers, amirite?

I'm glad you like it! I'll keep doing my best! ^_^

Damatris on 8th Aug 2015, 2:01 AM

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Don't say such terrible things.

Rinkelle on 8th Aug 2015, 12:21 PM

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We don't speak of such things in this house!
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