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Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 10:00 AM

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Good morning everyone! Sorry about the late page, I completely forgot to schedule it last night to upload this morning :P

Lilith getting her hair caught in the door is something I've really been wanting to add into the comic. I want it to become sort of a running gag with her (her hair is crazy long after all). I thought it'd be funny to show her super long hair getting caught and being sat on and kind of being in the way in contrast to other super long anime hair that just magically stays out of the way when the person sits down or walks through a door.

So you can expect this type of thing to show up more in the comic in the future.

I may or may not be changing the dialogue font, the one I'm currently using was made from a variant of my handwriting and when the text is smaller a lot of the skinnier letters meld together, making it hard to read some words.

Luckily for me there isn't much dialogue that'll need to be changed if I do decide to switch to a different font. And luckily for all of you, things will be easier to read.

I really like the stars on Lilith's bedroom door. It's cute and you can tell that's her room but it's also a fairly normal thing for a teenage girl to do, I think. My own bedroom door was covered in stuff when I was a teenager (Fullmetal Alchemist art I'd clipped from magazines and printed off the internet and such) so I think it's a nice little detail to have.

I really like this page, even if the perspective in the first panel killed me. The perspective on page 5 and 6 will be worse though. Darn perspective. Oh there's also the little tiny pictures in the picture frame, but I'll talk about those more next week.


Mmmm I think that's everything for this week. I caught some kind of cold or something so I've been mildly sick the past week, so that mixed with my absent-mindedness and some cold medicine led to the page being late today. I promise I'll be on time next week!

See you soon! ❤



TheD-Wrek on 30th Mar 2015, 10:23 AM

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Lol, that was super cute.

This needs to happen more, haha. But yeah, I would assume the poor shiny hair would get in the way a lot. X)

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 10:40 AM

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Yes, it's going to do the one job hair has. Well, apart from looking pretty. And that's inconvenience the person with said hair!!

It'll get stuck in doors and sat on and other shenanigans a lot more in the future, don't worry :D

TheD-Wrek on 30th Mar 2015, 10:52 AM

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Ha, cute. Can't wait for all the hair shenanigans. :D

Caranella on 30th Mar 2015, 12:40 PM

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This looks really impressive. I love how shiny the hair is and the layout of the room.

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 1:16 PM

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Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like the room, interior perspective is something I really struggle with ^_^

Epiale on 30th Mar 2015, 12:57 PM

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Haha, poor girl. I know that song and dance. Also the coloring is great, you can really get a feel for the texture of everything, and the hair is so pretty!

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 1:17 PM

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Thanks so much! I try my best to give everything texture and weight so it feels real ^_^

And I looooove drawing hair, despite the routines poor Lilith has to suffer through with her ridiculously long hair.

rokulily on 30th Mar 2015, 1:05 PM

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this is so real. i have done this and i'm just staring at this page remembering when i had 3foot hair and how much of a butt it was

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 1:18 PM

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I'm so sorry you've had to suffer this long-haired fate, Roku

D on 8th Apr 2015, 9:44 AM

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Mine never got past 50 cm(~2 feet), but I had situations like this too. Worst one was when my cat used is as ladder to get on my bed. ouch.

Rinkelle on 8th Apr 2015, 11:22 AM

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Oh wow that's really long :O
And that sounds terrible. Maybe your cat thought you were Rapunzel :P

ZeroGee on 30th Mar 2015, 3:29 PM

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Nothing worse than bad hair days. XD

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 3:54 PM

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Indeed.

HapyCow on 30th Mar 2015, 4:44 PM

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Aw she has star stickers on her door!! XD So adorable. Also I love this gag! Poor Lilith

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 4:48 PM

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She suffers for our enjoyment. she should've been a gladiator at this rate. She coulda been a contender...

Allzephyr on 30th Mar 2015, 5:28 PM

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You know, they never show anthros having this problem either. You have to suffer to be awesome comic people!

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 5:55 PM

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Just... it makes sense to show?? I think it's weird when stuff like this doesn't happen??

I dunno, it's something I see rarely if at all, so I decided to have hair problems plague my characters (especially Lilith with her super long hair and Canan with his long wavy hair).

Allzephyr on 31st Mar 2015, 9:48 AM

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Definitely a good decision.

rufiangel on 30th Mar 2015, 6:08 PM

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Ahahahaha, great page!! XD I love this gag! LOL. Lilith is so cute XD (and the hair is gorgeousss <3)

Rinkelle on 30th Mar 2015, 6:12 PM

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Thank you thank you! *curtsies*

Guest on 31st Mar 2015, 4:07 AM

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You know what's funniest to me? My name is Lilith... and this has actually happened to me. Long hair is great and all, and it looks really nice, but you gotta be careful with it. Cause that HURTS.

Rinkelle on 31st Mar 2015, 10:15 AM

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Aw, I'm sorry :c
My hair's starting to get long and it's always getting caught in things now so I'm learning to be careful with it >.>

ProfEtheric on 31st Mar 2015, 7:42 AM

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That sort of running gag is PERFECT!!!!

I am SO glad you're back to regular updates. I missed this. :)

Rinkelle on 31st Mar 2015, 10:16 AM

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Yeah, I'm glad to be back too, I missed drawing this comic. ^_^

Jarvi on 31st Mar 2015, 10:32 AM

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Cuuuuut theeeem~ Cuuuuuut theeeeem~
I know you want tooooo...
(no, you're not going to regret that decision for next xxx years till they grow back xD)

Rinkelle on 31st Mar 2015, 10:37 AM

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Great, keep it up! At this rate we'll brainwash her into having short hair all over and she'll lose all her powers! Then we can take over the woooooorld!

I mean uh

Hush Saari stop that XD

Spelledeg on 31st Mar 2015, 11:03 AM

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Oh Lillith xD~ I actually had this happen to me earlier today. Except it was a car door that caught my hair and not a room door. The pacing and paneling is really nice on this page. :)

Rinkelle on 31st Mar 2015, 11:12 AM

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Ahh, now everyone's hair-related stories come to light. A car door sounds terrible though. Once I got my finger caught in a car door and ended up scraping a lot of skin off trying to wrench it free so I can't imagine what It's be like to get your hair caught in a car door >.<

I'm glad you like the page, I was a bit worried that it was dragged out a bit for such a silly gag ^_^

melaredblu on 2nd Apr 2015, 12:04 AM

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And so Lilith discovered the wonders of braids and the world was forever changed.

Rinkelle on 2nd Apr 2015, 12:11 AM

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And she then said "Go forth, free of pain! For no longer shall long hair be caught in the dreadful door, nor sat upon by accident! No longer shall hair be found amongst one's food, nor blown into thine eyes by the troublesome wind!"

For she had discovered the miracle of braids. And all was well.

Book of Xeno, Gospel of Lilith 1:3

alston123 on 4th Apr 2015, 5:54 AM

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I can't believr I didn't read this sooner! I love the majestic feel of the art style. And ya gotta love manga. You've got my sub!! ;D

Rinkelle on 4th Apr 2015, 11:30 AM

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Better late than never! Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the rest of the comic ^_^
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