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Rinkelle on 16th Mar 2015, 4:42 PM

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I debated for a loooooooooooong time on whether to keep the dialogue from the original page on the new one or not.

I thought, in the end, that leaving it free of dialogue had more impact than the old version where Lilith talked about her recurring nightmare. In the old version if felt like the nightmare didn't affect her as much as I wanted it to. Here I think you can feel how much if affects her because she's too shaken up to speak and just sits on her bed trying not to cry in the last panel.

I try to avoid having pages without dialogue because I worry that people won't be able to tell what I'm trying to get across but I think for some things that need to have a certain amount of impact I'm going to use dialogue-free pages. There's one like that planned in chapter 1 as well, it's just all images and characters' feelings and reactions. No dialogue.

I also really like how this page turned out, I was unsure if I could get the lighting to look the way I wanted but it looks exactly like I pictured in my head and I love love love this page.

Wow

D on 8th Apr 2015, 8:57 AM

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It's rare to see someone not using text for bigger impact and even more to see someone use it properly. Good job.

Rinkelle on 8th Apr 2015, 11:25 AM

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Aah thanks so much! I really worried about whether to add text or not because the previous version had text. I'm glad people are liking the dialogue-free version ^_^

Lights

Nef on 2nd Jun 2015, 1:11 PM

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Phenomenal use of lighting on this page. You are scary good!

Rinkelle on 2nd Jun 2015, 1:51 PM

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Thank you so much! I worked really hard on this page and was super proud of it when I finished so I'm super glad you like it! :D
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