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6th Sep 2013, 10:15 AM

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Rinkelle on 16th Mar 2015, 4:37 PM

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My main concerns with this page were the color of Lilith's 'thought text' and the brightness of the magic that's enveloping redhead girl in the last panels.

I think the text is fine, though, it's not too dark or too light. I might change it to a dark lavender though, since that's one of Lilith's signature colors. I am quite attached to the blue though. Hm.

I also was unsure if colored text for thoughts was a good idea since spoken dialogue is in black and the thought bubbles are different shapes anyway, but I think it's a nice change from regular dialogue.



Little darker

D on 8th Apr 2015, 8:54 AM

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I think you should make it little darker.
Change to black is bad idea in my opinion. So is dark lavender.

Rinkelle on 8th Apr 2015, 11:28 AM

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Yeah, I think the black text would make it look too similar to the dialogue text. The whole point of colored text and bubble outlines was to differentiate thoughts from spoken words using more than just speech bubble shape.

I'll try out some darker colors when I have the spare time.

DoryH on 4th May 2015, 12:48 PM

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Like how you emphasized the "LITTLE" here!

Rinkelle on 4th May 2015, 1:25 PM

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Thanks ^_^

junoro on 10th Aug 2015, 3:58 PM

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Man, when I read the "little" part I could actually sort of hear how it would sound out loud? Really cool!

Rinkelle on 10th Aug 2015, 4:18 PM

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Oh wow that's so cool! I'm glad you like it! :D
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